take me away

take me away

A Poem by phjasmine
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did you ever wish you could be a kid forever?

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Take me away
To the land faraway
Were there’s pirates in plenty
And fairies that play
Were there’s mermaids are pretty
And the Indians brave

Teach me to fly
To fly in the sky
To the stars shimmering bright
To the second star to the right
Then straight on till morning
It’s a wonderful sight

Tell me the story
Of a boy and a girl
The one of a girl called Wendy
Who stole this boy’s heart
How she loved him dearly
But then had to leave

Never let me wake
Not till its over
For tomorrow I’ll be 15 and child no longer
Let me stay here, in Neverland
Were to die would be a awfully big adventure
For I believe in you, Peter Pan

© 2009 phjasmine


Author's Note

phjasmine
it's not that good just a small poem, i wrote it when i was 14. i was watching peter pan when i had the idea so yer. i could swear theres apart of every one that wishes they were still a kid that will never grow up. Am i right?

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This is great!

For a fourteen year old, this is amazing - very imaginative and there seems to be a sense of hope.
Peter Pan is one of my all time favorites, so I must tell you I really enjoyed reading this.

Lady



Posted 14 Years Ago


By this I can tell you had an advance mind at 14. Good read still

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on June 11, 2009

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phjasmine
phjasmine

Perth, Australia



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hey, dont really know what to say, i like writting, reading, music and art, i'm always looking to expand my writting abbilitys, i'm working on my spelling and grammer, really i am. I get most my ideas.. more..

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