Rediculous Mess

3/23/11 - I blame the butterflies in my stomach for this one!

I shouldn’t be feeling this way!

My silly heart does betray!

Just when I think I can see you and be fine,

my stomach gets butterflies.

I still have feelings so strong,

I know they can’t be wrong.

I can’t deny them at all.

Again for you I fall.

From the feelings I was distracted,

the pain and love retracted.

But then they come flooding back!

My mind and heart under attack,

and you’re winning.

My mind is spinning.

My body in a rush,

my face feeling all a-flush.

Why do you effect me so?

I hate it but don’t want it to go!

I feel like I’m drawn to you.

Like this love is overdue.

I can’t concentrate on a thing,

my heart just wants to dance and sing.

I look around hoping you’ll appear,

even though I know you’re nowhere near.

I am a rediculous mess,

But it’s all for you I confess.

Author's Note

This one just kinda...spilled out. I hope you like it.

Reviews

[northern monkey]

You're truly a master of rhythm and rhyme. Do you play any musical instrument; feel your work would make kick-a*s, story-telling song lyrics (eg for Lily Allen)?

[Lime-Eater]

Great! Really good!!!!!!! :)

[Shardbearer99]

That was wonderful. It does take a lot of talent to create poetry like this. I was never any good at it in school; it's something I failed to find the joy of creating. Again, another marvellous piece of poetry. It was sweet and very loving.

[Peter Joseph Swanson]

Fabulous!