my feelings

my feelings

A Poem by Irvette Dauphine
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this is about my feelings n my hope. i am too boyish, maybe i can be a perfect boyfriend

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i feel lonely, and there's nobody take care of me
but, i don't want to show it to everyone
i feel sad, and there's nobody make me smile
but, i don't want to show it to everyone
i feel down, and there's nobody cheer me up
but, i don't want to show it to everyone
my friends feel lonely?
i'll beside her
my friends feel sad?
i'll make she is smile back
my friends feel down?
i'll cheer her up
but, i never tell to my friends my truly feelings
cause i don't want to show it
i can manage it by myself
but, i still need someone
that i can show all my hidden feelings
to who that will always take care of me, make me smile, and cheer me up
what i want is, realized my feelings
do let me say it to you, cause it's already late
i hope one day there's will be a prince that just for me

© 2012 Irvette Dauphine


Author's Note

Irvette Dauphine
well, well.. it's still not complete yet...
my feelings is too mixed up
really need somebody besides me!!! :(

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A very Beautiful write. I like your writing style. Awesome write full of feelings.


Posted 6 Years Ago


What a lovely dream. It's nice to do that in awhile... I see the errors but I don't really care since it was understandable already (:

Posted 11 Years Ago


Hanii, I am always here for you to make you feel better and to cheer you up, and I'm sure you'll always be here to make me smile and feel better. I know that sometimes its hard to trust your friends and others, but I know you'll trust me c: . You are not a boy, you are a amazing wonderful lovable fantastic poetic girl.
Just remember, that I'm always here for you :) ♥
100/100

Posted 11 Years Ago


Irvette Dauphine

11 Years Ago

thank you very much :)
and once again, thank you
i'll remember that :D
∠( ᐛ 」∠)_

11 Years Ago

Anytime c:
Just remember that I'm here to be your star ☆

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Added on October 5, 2012
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Irvette Dauphine
Irvette Dauphine

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i really like to read books!! and it would be awesome if i can write some story and be a great book writer.. in holiday and my free time i like to imagine stories and in my mood i like to write poems.. more..

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