Phone Sex

 

 

Let’s not beat around this bush

Shush, let me speak

This is constructive critique

You need to work on your technique

Let’s call it meek chic

Oblique?

Don’t take this personal

First of all

But you asked for my opinion

Although not my dominion

I know what I know

There’s a certain quid pro quo

And you’re banking with the wrong lender

Currently not even a contender

Slender chances betting

I know, it’s upsetting

But least not forgetting

There’s hope for each of us

Thus, if you really want correction

Time for a little reflection

Not every woman feels rejection

When you withhold your affection

No, sometimes it’s a blessing

Because I’m guessing

They have a brain

No, I’m not being vain

Let me explain

Two syllable conversation

Causes mind sedation

Clumsy flirtation

Is sensual starvation

Your face said it all

Totally perplexed

So I just sent this text

'You got a face for phone sex'

Reviews

[Dye]

Great rhythm and flow to this. Enjoyed the humor quite a bit.

[Muse]

Two syllable conversation
Causes mind sedation
Clumsy flirtation
Is sensual starvation

lol, I was just reading Robbie and thought I was on an erotica streak...and here you go throw in some sarcastic humor. The way you rhymed...the use of syllables...there was a nice dance to your words...it read very smoothly. I forgot that you were a funny girl...you put on this serious façade...deep within....you are a silly little shite! :)))

[Poetic Justice]

I'm a f*****g laugh a minute me!!!! Lol but don't spread it around, wouldnt want to lose the rep...

[Muse]

lol yes...I too can smile and be a real idiot "don't tell" ha ha ha

[ron]

This one was great. And before you ask ME why i read it I will tell you. because it had SEX in it. And SEX in a poem shows the more interesting side of people...besides Im a guy, at least last time I checked...lol. Great poem.

[Poetic Justice]

Lol thanks

[SkinlessFrank]

Could you send me a recording of this done to rap music?

[Poetic Justice]

Lol do I look like I can rap????

[David Wesley]

Enjoyed this. Love the rhyme, love the language. Very edgy. =P

[Devons]

Street-talking straight talking in poetic fashion. This has a broad, hard-edged quality which is balanced by a wry phraseology which is amusing and stimulating as it makes its point. Perhaps it is more noticeable to the discerning mind (male or female) that there is an intellectual wall which invisibly precludes an attraction to even the most physically endowed of God's schmucks... And many more are better heard and not seen.

[Poetic Justice]

Oh why did you review this?? LOL thanking you kindly for your comments

[Devons]

I just saw the word SEX...;)

[Poetic Justice]

Really? where? ;)

[Sethnicity]

The White Ninja is Back!

Blades so sharp, if God stepped in He Would Be CUT!

[Poetic Justice]

lol

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Witty and feisty... you tickled my funny bone with this one.

[Pax Analog]

Amusing, lively, literate joust -- can we get salacious now? ;-) Unfortunately, the object of your witty scorn may have a face for phone sex, but little facility. After all, the engaging key to the inside-out nature of phone or cybersex is psychic depth, wit, passion. Ramps up nicely for full in-the-flesh presence if intelligently done. Cheerz!