Sleep Cycle

Restless thoughts and wanting dreams,

Leave me tossing through the night.

Every time I wake,

My thoughts go straight to you.

My weary soul tries hard,

To hold you in my mind.

My thoughts of you cause want of sleep,

So I can think of you anew.

Reviews

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

I agree; short and sweet (: beautiful job!

[Persona]

Short and sweet, really good! I love the layout and 'soul' to 'mind' because it reminds me of when you have a memory of a beautiful person's face but you're starting to forget it and you're trying hard to hold on to it!

[revalatia]

short and sweet.. liking this :)

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

complete obsession with another........leaves you tossing and turning. Well done.

[Adam Whitworth]

well done

[quinfinn]

very familiar feelings indeed....you have done them justice.

[mandy]

been there, felt like that, patrick. a very good poem.

[David Scott]

You must have an old soul my friend... Now that it's put on paper maybe rest will come?
A very fine write.

[Tarry Franck]

Very beautifully said my friend :)