Simple Touch

Sensations of Love and pleasure
Are emotions I can't measure
Feeling warm and secure
An affection I yearn to endure

To have rough hands caress mine
Trembling and anticipation do combine
Supple skin does sensitize
For this reaction, there's no compromise

Rapid breathing in an out
Sensual pleasure all about
Rough grooves touch the supple
Two hands become a couple.

Author's Note

be honest. this is an older poem that I wrote in 2005.

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

you have a special way to thoughts and words..
no one could measure love ,how long and how deep
i touched those hands..how strange i felt
and i trembled,its like touching a new life,and exploring
never explored before..how strange,what mixed feelings they gave
we are both so close in everything
feelings ,genes and chemistry
yet those hands felt so different,how they moved me, they touched
and brought magic..i could almost fly
whats in a touch,whats in a kiss..such magic i never saw the like before
how i could feel those textures i could spend days feeling the tingling
they gave me to no end..and i wonder again..whats in a touch
i was really moved again by those words..and i thought
lovely write..

[Sean M. Addams]

i liked this alot expressed very well...easy to read but the detail in this was well done..overall nice job on this.. your talent shows through..

[The Water Queen]

Your writing never ceases to amaze me. I love how well you made the lines flow and the rhyming was beautiful and so loevely. good work once again continue on.

--The Angel of the Earth--

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

The rhyming scheme was simple but it made the flow of the poem delightful and then sentiment so sincere.

[MissWordSmith]

I liked the idea behind the poem. however you could improve on the rhyming and the tempo it was a little too simple for your writing! I mean, you can make it better, I KNOW U CAN! But like I said, the ideas behind this were really great. gave me the whole picture. your words were so true....excellent.

[alesuriko]

Nicely written, good imagery.

[Elissa; the genuine art..]

I really like this.
It wasn't overly graphic, but the point was still conveyed perfectly.
"Sensations of Love and pleasure
Are emotions I can't measure"
That is a truly beautiful line.
It was an excellent way to start this piece.
Excellent work!

-Elissa :)

[Frantzuu]

Wow this is beautiful, my heart beat a little fast as I read the poem, and great use of imagery. When your heart beat faster as you read a poem that's how you know it's good. Very well done, descriptive short and sweet.

[Coyote Poetry]

When two hands touch and passion and desire is the purpose and goal. A fire can be sparks. A excellent poem. Told a kind story of love. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[The Analog Kid]

Simple style, just like the title, flows nicely. Good use of contrast between supple and rough:) Sometimes a touch is all we need....