Secret World

A Poem by Poetic Beauty

Endless night
Heavenly flights
Soft moments together

Quiet sighs
Laughter flies
A hearts communication

A feathery touch
Longing so much
Emotions now seeking

Hearts growing
Care showing
Secret place inside.

© 2010 Poetic Beauty

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Katie Louise Hughes

oooo, I like this one a lot! The few words, so simple, really have a pleasant and firm message within these words. I like the ending to this one especially.
"Hearts growing
Care showing
Secret place inside."
Thanks, and I'm sure you'll keep up the writing! :D

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Katie Louise Hughes

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Ladysue

This was so tender and moving...

hearts growing/care showing/secret place inside...

what a beautiful piece of writing...

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Fabian G. Franklin

Those secret places where we store our most tender thoughts and feelings are the closet to our hearts and souls. This was beautiful!

Posted 14 Years Ago

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Added on March 6, 2010
Last Updated on March 11, 2010

Author

Poetic Beauty

corn country, IL

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First off I'm on here to post my writing to have an outlet for my emotions. You will find a variety of poems. If you like take a moment and stroll through this poets mind. Secondly be kind to each .. more..