My Regret

I know I caused you hurt
I know I caused you pain
I know I truly fucked up
Making our love corrupt

Can't change what is in the past
Ripping two hearts with that blast
Pain that gripped deep down inside
Not showing the ache, you did hide

No longer able to take it back
This love wasn't gone, now react
Great love is still within my heart
The one that only you could start

I know I caused you hurt
I know I caused you pain
I know I truly fucked up
Making our love corrupt

Walking away came hauntingly fast
It was like a shocking bomb blast
You never thought or saw  it coming
The ache completely mind numbing

I get down on my bruised bended knee
Asking will you ever completely forgive me
Will you ever trust me with your heart again
Or does it still need more time to heal and mend?

Reviews

[alesuriko]

Trust is a hard thing to get back, people nowadays give it out too easily and then once it's broken, they refuse. Good poem. Expresses how people in relationships know they did something wrong, they were always keenly aware of what they were doing but once they see the consequences they regret it. I agree with the "bruised bended knee" the imagery is very nice.

[Kim]

I know this is a sad subject poem, however, I felt it was beautiful. I really liked it and could feel pain behind the words.

[Emily B]

I hope you get it back on track. Roads mended and all that.

[Frantzuu]

I like the repetition of the first stanza great job :D

[Bette]

i like this one my friend