Modern Knight

inspired by my charming wrote for creative poetry.

His angelic voice is calming to my ears
It releases the stress filled with fears
Violet tones sound threw my being
Vanishing the pain and soul freeing

Charming, my knight, of medieval times
Modern but with metallic armor he climbs
Rescuing when my world beings to sway
Giving me hope with a bright display

Exulting me from deep dark despair
Showing kindness with his special flair
No white steed or jousting for this man
But into his comfort I've always ran

Silver piercings gleaming within the light
Tattooed and handsome staying up all night
He is my solace on the confusing earth
With passion he's shown me my self worth

Never ignoring an issue that causes me pain
Forever my heart he has gallantly slain
Since our time of meeting took place
Butterflies in the stomach, heart does race

No longer lovers but complex friends
Always there to help, him I do commend
Listening in my times when the road is rough
And caring when my pleading soul has had enough

Understanding when no other person does
Everyone else , he continuously outdoes
Relaxing my inner self when frantic with pain
My trust, my love, my whole spirit he does gain
 

Reviews

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. he seems like rain on a parched and winding day ... he seems so deserving of all that you say ... but oh how you say it is so magical and true ... you heal the grey and mould the blue ... your rhyme flows with stunning thoughts ... like lines joining those mesmerizing dots ... and i can't help but be amazed ... and then in awe be a little dazed ... very few people know that i'm originally a rhymer ... and when i see lines like these ... straight from the soul ... i'm more than inspired ...

[kewlbluetiger]

Ah, really great poem. My favorite stanza is the first. Love the way you tied the violet color to the sound- smooth, very smooth. The lines about him being your solace and brining self worth are pretty striking also.

Very interesting that this is just a "complex friend..."
Not-
Buying-
It At All.

Fantastic Write!

[G. Marie"floating on an..]

wow Kristina this is a fabulous poem You mixed medieval romance with modern day life which is fantastic and anyone can relate to that. I think it would be cool if you had used Doth(old English writing) instead of does. but it is great as is. just my crazy ideas. I'm starting to like others versions of this poem more and more. grreat work Kristina!!!