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Freeing Addiction

Freeing Addiction

A Poem by Poetic Beauty
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A moment when you know it could be but hasn't happen yet

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Close your sparkling eyes and drift with me
Where love's fire is eternally abundant
A place where splendor is magical and grand
Fingers entwine with names written in the sand

A quiet moment stolen within the night
Under cover in a the mythical realm
Moonlight fantasies cast their encompassing spell
Creating and intoxicating lingering smell

A time caught between present and the future
Where love can silently creep in to begin
A place where there are mythical delights
But could become sinful desirous flights

In a time not yet to be discovered
Still blanketed in a veiling white fog
Trapped in the middle of real or fiction
Oh, how I could let you become my freeing addiction






© 2011 Poetic Beauty


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Love the fomat. I find it very difficult to rhyme a poem. So in my eyes u have done a good job.

Posted 8 Years Ago


freeing addiction - interesting title - i know a couple of my own addictions i escape to to free myself of monotony and routine - yet the liberating escape if off balance sets me right back into craving sanity - enjoyable fiction...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beautiful write,
it flows perfectly,
the last two lines are awesome!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

great poem about what it is to be addicted to one person.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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I have written a similar piece on the addiction of love..oh the cravings!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Delightfully captured moment! I paricularly like the way it starts with a reference to the subject/lover then explores a fantasy world they might inhabit with you and then focuses again on the lover in the last line.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It is beautiful and well written. Gave me a sense of peace as I read, the flow was so smooth!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A diverse adn intelligent prose, well done, great read.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

A powerful poem of desire and emotion. I like the words "my freeing addiction". The descripton was strong. Sometime real and fiction doesn't matter as long as you are content. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


0 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Wonderful job, flowed nicely with a
soft touch...well done..

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Poetic Beauty
Poetic Beauty

corn country, IL



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First off I'm on here to post my writing to have an outlet for my emotions. You will find a variety of poems. If you like take a moment and stroll through this poets mind. Secondly be kind to each .. more..

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