Freeing Addiction

A moment when you know it could be but hasn't happen yet

Close your sparkling eyes and drift with me
Where love's fire is eternally abundant
A place where splendor is magical and grand
Fingers entwine with names written in the sand

A quiet moment stolen within the night
Under cover in a the mythical realm
Moonlight fantasies cast their encompassing spell
Creating and intoxicating lingering smell

A time caught between present and the future
Where love can silently creep in to begin
A place where there are mythical delights
But could become sinful desirous flights

In a time not yet to be discovered
Still blanketed in a veiling white fog
Trapped in the middle of real or fiction
Oh, how I could let you become my freeing addiction

Reviews

[bOhEmIa (mahim)]

Love the fomat. I find it very difficult to rhyme a poem. So in my eyes u have done a good job.

[Liza]

freeing addiction - interesting title - i know a couple of my own addictions i escape to to free myself of monotony and routine - yet the liberating escape if off balance sets me right back into craving sanity - enjoyable fiction...

[roy mccarthy]

beautiful write,
it flows perfectly,
the last two lines are awesome!

[Ice QueenJen]

great poem about what it is to be addicted to one person.

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I have written a similar piece on the addiction of love..oh the cravings!

[Poeticadia]

Delightfully captured moment! I paricularly like the way it starts with a reference to the subject/lover then explores a fantasy world they might inhabit with you and then focuses again on the lover in the last line.

[KAREN]

It is beautiful and well written. Gave me a sense of peace as I read, the flow was so smooth!!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A diverse adn intelligent prose, well done, great read.

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem of desire and emotion. I like the words "my freeing addiction". The descripton was strong. Sometime real and fiction doesn't matter as long as you are content. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Dream Weaver]

Wonderful job, flowed nicely with a
soft touch...well done..