Heart's Melody

Floating on fluffy rose petal clouds

Wrapped in softly spun silken shrouds

With cotton candy melting delight

And heated pastel yellow sun light

 

Drifting on a merriment sea

Singing an entrancing melody

Ocean of feelings nothing but calm

Gently tracing chocolate satin palms

 

Surrounded by a velvet night

Gazing at his eyes of starlight

Intoxicated with exotic glee

A heart beats a rhythm of being free

 

Sailing down a vigorous water slide

Where two lives begin to collide

With a mystical silvery flowing date

As cupids arrow begins to create

 

 

Reviews

[I Am Svetlana]

As I read this, I could clearly envision each scene you described. Very beautiful and it's wonderful how you are able to describe things. You incorporate so much in your writing that just gives it that extra edge for me...keeps me reading and thinking. You have my full attention in each poem. I love your ideas and the way you bring it to life with the words that help bring it out.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

this makes me want to fall in love............right now. I love the line wrapped in softly spun silken shrouds........beautiful wordplay!

[Enigma]

Stunning poetry. It flowed well and sent sent so many feelinsg - sights and smells - rippling through me. Wonderful imagery. Great write. :)

[Hello, Goodbye]

wonderful poetry.. it holds a delightful infectious vitality, in its shimmering beauty.. absolutely loved the ending..

[Dream Weaver]

Gorgeous expressions of imagery here.
Great write Kristina :) x

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

So 'sweet',,, many lines i love but i love all of them to choose.
The pink text works well with cotton candy in the poem .. a peaceful poem full of love.

Chloe

[Michael X]

wow, loved the magic and the way with delicate emotions, your words paint a soft enchantment that literally whispers off the page, beautiful and romantic :)

[Ruth]

Absolutely amazing :) You can create a wonderful scene from such beautiful imagery. This is truly something lush! I needed to read this today - warming! Refreshing too! xx

[lyndsey]

The poem makes me think of love as sweet bliss...a job well done!