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A Poem by Poetic Beauty

Men are beautiful

Creatures

That live by

Their own code

 

What are those

Codes?

Don’t ask me

I am still

Sifting through

The encryptions

At the age of 33

 

Is s for sex ?

Or is it the number

69?

 

Is L of love

Or is it the number 2?

Shakes my head

I am still so

Confused

 

Is d for devotion

Or is it the infinity symbol?

Oh wait

Is that a figure 8?

 

This definitely 

isn't your

grandpa's Morris code


I have given

Up trying to figure

It all out

It makes me

Want to pull

My hair

Throw a tantrum

And pout.

 

I will leave

You to

Decipher

The code

I would rather

Let it all

Simply flow.

© 2012 Poetic Beauty


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This is unique and something different from what I have been reading lately. And I like it. Though male-centric, I think the idea of endless attempts to figure out the opposite sex is common to all of us. The brains are hard-wired in a completely different manner but sometimes, that's the beauty of it.

Well penned. And I like the ending, because I have given up as well. :P

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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6 9.... you're dirty... jk. awesome write. very interesting read on men.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I told my daughters. "Men are like dogs. Give them a scent and they will run into the direction." I like the questions in the poem. Few codes for men. Funny part. Woman have caught up with the men. Soon few honest people will be left? A very good poem. Open the door to thoughts and many more questions. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh, the mystery that is man......le sigh. Well written!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'd love to tell you, but they'd have my head... :P
Very good write Kristina, nicely put together!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm a guy and I haven't figured it out either. Great write. Really enjoyed this piece.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fabulous and very creative writing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this question knows no end.... if anyone breaks the code, please fill me in!!!!
this was very creative!! great write!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I could tell you but you've given up so nevermind then. A opposite gender soul not worth telling :P d, 69, s, l

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That is too hard to read... but I really want to.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sorry found it hard to read.....

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Poetic Beauty
Poetic Beauty

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