I can't seem to find the strength

I can't seem to find the strength

A Poem by mae-mae<3

Step

Drop

Spin

I'm ending this today

 

Click

Bang

Fall

I'm ending this today

 

Cut

Slice

Bleed

I'm ending this today

 

Match

Gas

Fire

I'm ending this today

 

Claw

Break

Shake

I'm ending this today

 

Live

Laugh

Love

Maybe I'll wait a bit longer

© 2009 mae-mae<3


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Wow that was unexspecting at the end. I loved the poem, I haven't seen this kind of format in a while, and I like it, nice job

Posted 15 Years Ago
Wow! Simply compelling. The emotion is so true in this that it had me caught up in the feeling. Amazing how simplicity sometimes says the most. Excellent piece!

Posted 15 Years Ago

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 Added on March 7, 2009

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mae-mae<3

All Over Dover, DE



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