I only see you

this is a poem about seeing for the first time that special someone that shines above all the rest

I've never seen a soul

Gleaming in the light

 

That can match

Your eyes in darkness

 

They really are too bright

 

Yet I want to look

To stare into the sun

 

They've burned out of my head

Now you're the only one

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[KAOlmsted]

Very nice.

[Gray Witch]

Enjoyed this ... short, sweet, light - with a message...lol

[R.M. Duchene]

Another great piece. I liked the emotion in the Christmas poem more, it seemed more raw....but then again...I'm a horror writer :)

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

lol if you like emotion you would like a few poems I wrote years ago one is caled "the snowing chamber" , the other is called "crimson truths" actually I have a quite a few emotional ones hahaha