Strawberry

Strawberry

A Poem by Emily Dickinson Jr.
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A haiku about a strawberry

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Red fruit on sweet lips

Symbolizing Summer's Bliss

Sweet berry of mine

 

© 2012 Emily Dickinson Jr.


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This is sweet :) I could feel summer love! Thanks for entering the "Scream" contest.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

6 Years Ago

Lol no problem :-). Glad I cud take u there
Wow! Cute! I like it! You have a goooooooood chance in the contest! ;) You may even get first.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Emily Dickinson Jr.

6 Years Ago

ooh yay! I'd really love that, I'll keep my fingers crossed while I wait patiently munching on my st.. read more
Short and sweet. I like it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


As a fellow contestant of this contest i'd have to say your work was very well thought.

Posted 6 Years Ago


are you trying to torture me...with words like summer...really it is snowing here again!
hahaha this is quite cute and obviously causes emotion!
thank you for sharing your WARM thoughts and strawberries are the best

Posted 6 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

6 Years Ago

lol the horrible power of haiku! :-) theyre one of my favorite fruits
such a beautiful poem thx so much and colorful.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

6 Years Ago

thanx :-) just kinda whimsical thing of mine
poetry-kiddo alienbaba

6 Years Ago

very nice
Nice haiku! Really does the strawberry justice :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Emily Dickinson Jr.

7 Years Ago

Good!! I rly love strawberries
Alexa Tasch

7 Years Ago

Personally I'm not such a huge fan, but they are great to take photos of!!
Emily Dickinson Jr.

7 Years Ago

lol
Lovely piece! Strawberries are good. I love them as a shake personally. It tastes heavenly! lol. YUMMY! =D

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Emily Dickinson Jr.

7 Years Ago

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You've actually got six syllables in the first line, not five.
You could drop the word "small" without losing any meaning.
Other than that, I like it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


yumyumyumyumyummy

Posted 7 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

7 Years Ago

lol

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Added on August 14, 2012
Last Updated on August 16, 2012
Tags: haiku, fruit, strawberry, red, summer

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Emily Dickinson Jr.
Emily Dickinson Jr.

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Im just a highschool girl. Writing is my hobby and I think Im fairly good at it but I leave you to be the judge of that. :-) my best short stories are: http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/poisinros.. more..

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