One Wish

One Wish

A Poem by Prabha Salimath
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Wish me do it in Real...

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Dark, dark, dark.
Everyone is afraid of it.
Even the colour black too.
Complete dark, devil dark.
Still I'm happy.
There opens another door.
Yeah, that is a soothing castle.
So I'm switching into there now.
My world as everyone's.
This is the time exactly,
I can own my life as I.
Things, people & situation
everything only on my side.
I have the power to do,
everything and anything.
Whatever I wanted to do.
I'm the supreme here.
Light is for society,
family, friend & lover.
I imagine the things,
like I can talk to everyone,
make anyone my friend.
I figure out all the problems
and justify the things.
I wanted to put everything correct
and put light on it.
I need to do it not in dark like I think dark, but in light to light my one wish.

© 2014 Prabha Salimath


Author's Note

Prabha Salimath
I can figure out the things when I'm alone in mind, in datkness. I always wanted to do all them correct.

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In Mexican culture, a person can wrap themselves in darkness like a warm blanket on a cold night. And ad the warmth of the blanket makes the blood warm and the bones strong, the become a single minded thought.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Prabha Salimath

10 Years Ago

The darkness here I mean in mind in loneliness.
Thank you for the review.
i liked the idea of darkness..i liked the hope of fighting it n making the things right...i liked the strong will of walking the tough road..full of hope n positiveness...well written Prabha..:)

Raj

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Prabha Salimath

10 Years Ago

Thanks for the review Raj.
The more brain gets the tough, the more I becomes sharp I believe .. read more
raj24

10 Years Ago

well said..toughness only improves us..:)
I really love what you are saying here because you are acknowledging that the dark exists, you are confronting it, and dealing with it in your own way. I agree that for some people this is the best approach, there's no need to burden others with the dark. Sometimes we just need to deal with it ourselves. The only caution to this would be to recognizing when pride is getting in the way of us seeking guidance when we need it. I really enjoyed this one, I find it very relatable. well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Prabha Salimath

10 Years Ago

Thank you Ance.
Life opens wide when you confront many odds. Problem trains brain very well.... read more
Matching Socks

10 Years Ago

Indeed. : )
You're welcome.

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Added on July 23, 2014
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