---PLEASE GIVE IT A TITLE---

i need your help in giving this poem a title... it´s really hard for me to give it one, i´am accepting all your suggestions..thanx!!!:))

---PLEASE GIVE IT A TITLE---

 

 

There are many words I want to write,

About how you always made my day so bright,

If I could just have a one big pen,

I´ll write it upon every hearts of men.

 

Where can I find that unceasing care?

That you made me feel, here and there,

Calling my name in such a wonderful way,

telling me that you love me each and every day.

 

If I could just tie myself to you,

I promise, I’ll never let you go,

Because with you I’m always smiling,

I´m forgetting those bad and silly things,

The fear that I thought no one could ever cease,

But I found you and changed it into a heart of peace.

 

Thanks for being too good and too kind.

You´re really a treasure that is hard to find,

And I will always love you for both,

And keep you in my heart forever, as long as I could.

Author's Note

i´am waiting for your suggestions..:))

Reviews

[Daytonight]

Great poem. I would call it "In My Heart Forever." Keep up the great work.

[thoughts of jade]

This is by far one of the best ones you've written so far. Keep on writing and let that passion keep on burning :)

[Fate]

a very nice poem. so sweet and lovely...

[M.Babu]

"Where can I find that unceasing care?
That you made me feel, here and there,"

Loved this line. It had enough of the "lovish" tinge that it sounded quite authentic.
Such a bright and lovely poem....put a smile on my face.

Nicely done.

~M. Babu~

[dreaming dame]

:) A beautiful write. :)
I would have to agree with Crystal and coyote.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree with Crystal suggestion for the title. "My Heart Forever'". A very nice poem of hope and thankfulness. A wise person will hold on to both with honor. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Crystal Marie Rome]

This poem gave me a great big smile. I would suggest 'My Heart Forever' for the title. =)

[Lily Mae]

I love it.. xxx

"A Heart's Promise"

[rae52]

i like it a lot

[?]

Very well written
like this alot
I was thinking something like Treasured Heart
or A Heart Trreasured