We Dont Live Forever

Not The Best, Wrote It In Class

We Don't Live Forever And We Don t Know Why, All We Can Do Is Live And Try, We Wish To Live Longer, But Death Makes Us Stronger, Its Hard And Its Rough, But Stay Strong Stay Tough, Theres Not Much I Can Do, But Be There For You, Ill Be Your Guide, That One Special Guy, To Make You Smile, To Make Life Worthwhile, What Is Life Without Light, To Shine Your Day And To Shine Your Night, i Can Be Your Light, To Shine Your Life, Everyday And Every Night, Words Of Silence Just Ain't Right, Shall I Say Good Night, Do I Want To Live Anymore, Should I Walk Out That Door, The Door To The Sky, Ill Walk Out Without Saying Goodbye, Ive Made Up My Mind, Ill Leave It All Behind, Theres No Use, Anymore, What Am I Working For, Do I Live For Hate And Pain, No, So I'm Done Playing This Game, I'm Wasting My Time, Im Loosing My Mind, Will It All Work Out, Maybe Ill Take A Different Route, We Don't Live Forever And We Don't Know Why, All We Can Do Is Live And Try

Author's Note

Pretty Decent I Suppose, Let Me Know How It Is.

Reviews

[The Wave]

nice,
really enjoyed reading this piece.

overall, its written well, i think if you separate this into stanzas it would be not only easier to read, but have a nicer flow. i did pick up on one tiny spelling error, "loosing" should be "losing"...but thats easily fixed. loved what you said,
good job

[Emily B]

does it really want to sit all balled up in a lump on the page? I think it wants some apostrophes here and there, too . . .