that girl

humans hate those who are superior!!

 

They saw that hideous face

..

That ugly body

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Those beastly hands

..

Her grisly orange eyes

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That horrid face

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Her frightful heart

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But never they saw

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Beneath

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All that

Loathsome appearance

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 The

Kind hearted

Dazzlingly

..

Beautiful

..

Refined

..

Elegant

..

Charming

..

Personality of hers!!

..

And they

Destroyed her

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Without even touching!!

 

 

Reviews

[Mark]

We fear and destroy what we do not understand. Wouldn't it be grand if we all understood that we are part of each other? Connected and dependent, wouldn't that be the real beginning of humanity? Very great write here, particular impacted by the ending to destroy someone without touching.

[Muhammad Qasim]

Well thank you .. Glad you like it! : )

[Anita Harris]

You have a very great point. Great job :)

[Muhammad Qasim]

thanks!

[Heather]

beautifully written.. amazing job!

[Muhammad Qasim]

Thank you for that wonderful review. :D

[Heather]

No problem :)

[Muhammad Qasim]

: )

[Heather]

Could you also review some of my pieces?? I don't think they are as good as yours :)

[Muhammad Qasim]

ya sure but i am not a very good reviewer but i'll try my best! : )

[dunnia]

simply perfect..... loved it!

[Muhammad Qasim]

hehe .. thanks for lovin it!!

[That_Girl]

Haha how could I not read this?! hehe

But on a more serious note... I liked it. Short and to the point. Well executed.

[Muhammad Qasim]

Haha .. what a coincidence
N also Thanksss for reviewing!!

[That_Girl]

Most welcome!

[Muhammad Qasim]

: )

[Chesney W.]

whoa...(speechless) bravo!! an excellent write!
-Chesney Chey(:

[Muhammad Qasim]

thankss :)

[Chesney W.]

ur welcome(: