that girl

humans hate those who are superior!!

 

They saw that hideous face

..

That ugly body

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Those beastly hands

..

Her grisly orange eyes

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That horrid face

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Her frightful heart

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But never they saw

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Beneath

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All that

Loathsome appearance

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 The

Kind hearted

Dazzlingly

..

Beautiful

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Refined

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Elegant

..

Charming

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Personality of hers!!

..

And they

Destroyed her

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Without even touching!!

 

 

Reviews

[Mark]

We fear and destroy what we do not understand. Wouldn't it be grand if we all understood that we are part of each other? Connected and dependent, wouldn't that be the real beginning of humanity? Very great write here, particular impacted by the ending to destroy someone without touching.

[Muhammad Qasim]

Well thank you .. Glad you like it! : )

[Anita Harris]

You have a very great point. Great job :)

[Muhammad Qasim]

thanks!

[InsanityWriter]

It's too bad how so many people judge based off of appearances. :( Knowing the true person beneath is the most important. Excellent poem!(:

[Muhammad Qasim]

Yes .. my point exactly, people should tend more to the inside and less to the outside and thank you for reviewing : )

[Abdul Batin Osman Bey]

very well written I like the emotions, the way it flows is excellent.

[Muhammad Qasim]

Thank you!

[Shay]

i liked it alot good job

[Muhammad Qasim]

Thank you!!

[MOON]

Lovely write like judging a book by its cover rather then its content. As a society its seems always style over substance.

[Muhammad Qasim]

Yes .. i totally agree with you!! people ignore others by seeing what is in front and not what is inside!

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful description led the reader on a interesting journey. I had to read again to grasp the very good ending. No weakness in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Muhammad Qasim]

well thanks alot .. it means alot : )

[ms. barrie]

this is a very powerful, emotive write, brilliantly conveying how sad and demeaning it is to one's soul, how most of society never looks past appearances, instead of looking into another's heart. i agree, this is indeed thought provoking, speaking the truth, this is how one descends into such utter despair in which the person can then in turn start hurting themselves. beautifully written, and a poem that definitely needed to be spoken (written) about. 100/100 - adds this to my favorites..

[ms. barrie]

p.s. thanks for sharing

[Muhammad Qasim]

well thank you and totally glad that you like it!

[ms. barrie]

yes i did, and you're very welcome, take care :)

[Muhammad Qasim]

hehe .. thank you and you too .. take care : )

[The dark story]

that was so thought provoking..the theme is so apt and is having a strong powerful message in it....it's the heinous part of the human which destroys others.leading them to the black dark ocean of despair...."envy".one of the foulest feeling in human...you have depicted that in your poem in a very elegant way.i liked it..it does not only destroys othrs but also the one who is the vessel of such feelings...the last line was just so touching...you have penned the human nature very nicely and i also like the use of the diction......awesome work!.thanks for sharing it with us!!!!!1

[Muhammad Qasim]

Humans are just so much .. Totally agree with you .. they destroy and then regret doing it but no matter what be done .. spilled milk cannot be gathered!!

[Muhammad Qasim]

and thank you for reviewing :D

[The dark story]

it's my pleasure to read your nice work...well.yuo sound a but aggressive over there.

[Muhammad Qasim]

I have seen this happen over and over in my surroundings so i might i have gotten a bit aggressive as u said .. n Thank you for reading it : )

[lee von cleef]

Spot on . We are a sorry lot,the mind brain action of a body, flesh and bone,tooth,eye,
ribs and boots,a sorry lot,but you knew that, I will call you...Charactor .because you have it.

[Muhammad Qasim]

haha .. who doesn't have a mind brain action of a body, flesh and bone, tooth, eye, ribs and boots!! :D
and thank you for reviewing!

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

I loved reading this! It spreads a powerful message to everyone. It's true with the society that we're living in these days, people judge with your appearance. I'm a firm believer in judging from within and if they have good looks, that's just a plus. I rather have a funny, sensitive, and caring guy than some surfer guy with abs that treats me like crap. I think personalities get overlooked way too much! As every generation passes by, it's shown that my statement is true too. There has been too many hearts and feelings hurt from people's opinions about their appearances, but when they're truly beautiful. What makes a person beautiful is what lies within. Someone might say that their crush is fine....but they start to change their mind once they see the uglyiness from within shining onto the outside. You thoroughly penned this topic and I did enjoy reading! Keep up the good work!! :)

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

[Muhammad Qasim]

Haha .. totally agree with your opinion about great people being destroyed because of their ugly looks .. people just don't understand that at times the best rock is the one that looks sturdy n not the soft or good looking oneZ .. n yea .. among a girl with good looks with bad attitude n one having a bit normal looks with great attitude .. i would totally go for the better attitude!! humans have the tendency to put looks much over anything else!!

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Yes, I agree with you. You have some great and strong beliefs towards this topic, which is amazing! :)

[Muhammad Qasim]

Hmm .. well thank you!! Is it good or bad ?

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

You're welcome, and of course good! :)

[Muhammad Qasim]

: )

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

:)

[Muhammad Qasim]

:D

[Dr. Wood ?]

true of so many I am afraid..Humans are by nature wary of anything that they cannot understand

[Muhammad Qasim]

I agree ..and thank you for the review. : )