A lover of hate

The world is full of those who control and the one's who are controlled!!

I sparkled

Seeing that smile

Never knowing

My virtue 

Was played

By that mind behind

The magical dye was cast

the so called love 

Upon me

Totally done for

I was

My innocence done for

Betrayed by that grin

Which had me laugh

And laugh

Until that fateful time

I was played

A toy .. a puppet

I became 

Never knowing

Innocent one's are 

preyed the most

Imprinted upon me

I became who i am

A lover of hate!

Reviews

[The dark story]

the theme is nice and actually fits in todays world...i liked the wise use of your diction here ...it's kinda disgusting when we here people becoming so aggressive and what you have said precisely "the lover of hatred" because of such erroneous "masters"...playing with their innocence and life...it's truly despairing...nice work!! and thanks for sharing it with us!!

[Muhammad Qasim]

well thank you! :) and well i just wrote what came to mind! i am a natural hehe :P

[The dark story]

no need for thanks ..that's why we are here at writers cafe...and natural what??...

[Muhammad Qasim]

writer naa!! natural writer :) hehe n we say thank you to show our gratitude!

[Lunette Lariz]

This is lovely. I like poems with this kind of themes.

[Muhammad Qasim]

Now i know!! Thank you

[Lunette Lariz]

Haha, always my pleasure. :D

[Muhammad Qasim]

: )

[Hamza]

*sob*
the first two lines have been a book of life for me ...
i can't tell you what those two lines mean to me ..
but bro .. you really touched that aching corner within me with this poem ...

[Muhammad Qasim]

ooh .. i just crossed that phase .. i totally know what you mean!! n Thank you!!

[Muhammad Ibraheem]

yeah of course
those lines are reality for most of the people..

[Muhammad Qasim]

yes .. they are but these experiences make us better people and better human's

[Muhammad Ibraheem]

sometimes better and sometimes worst..

[Muhammad Qasim]

but always take in the good experiences and leave the bad one's .. but very few wise one's are able to do that

[Muhammad Ibraheem]

some experiences make you obstinate too

[Muhammad Qasim]

there are millions of possibilities and you can not decide which one you want! just luck .. sheer luck

[Muhammad Ibraheem]

in those thousands hurt and can even make you psychologically lonely

[Muhammad Qasim]

that .. i know!

[Muhammad Ibraheem]

i know u know it
freaking world :P

[Muhammad Qasim]

hehe .. true!

[Muhammad Ibraheem]

no more comments ..

[Muhammad Qasim]

Okay

[Tea Boo]

I like the song, its really cool. (:

[Muhammad Qasim]

hehe .. it's not a song but as long as you like it .. i am glad!! : )

[Tea Boo]

Poem xD I was listening to song and i just wrote song xD But really its awesome (:

[Muhammad Qasim]

Hehe .. Okay!! Thank you!!

[Tea Boo]

No problem :)

[dunnia]

i love the last line "a lover of hate" lots of people turn that way with harsh experiences without even realizing

[Muhammad Qasim]

I agree .. the world is entirely a very harsh place .. and Thank you!

[dunnia]

your welcome