Daffodil

Daffodil

A Poem by rachylou

The beautiful Daffodil,

Dotted around the hill,

Brightens our lives,

As soon as one arrives.

 

But then the stem starts to tilt,

And the flowers start to wilt,

Then gone is all the beauty,

And the world seems gloomy,

Because the beautiful Daffodil is gone.

© 2012 rachylou


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rachylou
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nice images..it is a pity people dont plant chives with them, they hide the daff leaves and come into flower just as the daff flower disappears. I like how you create a feeling of suddenly observing and the pleasure in it...also the feeling of loss when it is gone. lovely.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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thx for the reviews

Posted 7 Years Ago


very sweet i really loved it

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice images..it is a pity people dont plant chives with them, they hide the daff leaves and come into flower just as the daff flower disappears. I like how you create a feeling of suddenly observing and the pleasure in it...also the feeling of loss when it is gone. lovely.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 25, 2012
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rachylou
rachylou

Warrington, Appleton, United Kingdom



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Hi My name is rachel and i am a teenage girl. I love hockey and netball more..

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