she

she
    she thinks she the queen of hearts
I
    I am the ruler of all cards
she
    she waits to get me at the end of the day
I
    I am her pray
she
    she thinks she can beat me
I
     I already won
she
    she has her army
I
   I am all alone
she
    she will find me
I
    I am ready
she
    she thinks she has her "man" on her hips
I
    I have him on my lips
she
   she haves he evil magic
I 
    I have my thoughts
she
     she has blonde curls
I
    I have my long brown hair
she
    she thinks of only herself
I
     I have the powers of others
she
     she has eyes to change
I
      I have eyes to kill
she
        she has her silly vocie 
I
       I have my words
she
       she will die
I
     I being her killer

Author's Note

to you bully's on my bus

Reviews

[Spookers]

I liked it. Very creative. A few grammar errors, but it was well thought out

[alexlessah]

wow truly amazing!

[Sweet Little Bunny]

I love the ending. Awesome poem!

[brenda]

right there! dont care about them you are much better than them !! really good write!

[ब्र&#..]

this was really great
alltid
-Meja Malina

[Miu]

Beautiful. :)

[Bailey C. Writing]

she
she thinks she the queen of hearts
*She thinks she is the queen of hearts
she
she haves he evil magic
*She has her evil magic?
Intense! I feel this way about people a lot too. Very good piece. Good format, stable repetitiveness, good job, I liked it.

[Chris]

Aaahh bullies, I remember those annoying lil pests.

I really like the format of this piece. Certainly is refereshing seeing something different.

So simple yet so malign. This is how you use simplicity to it's fullest potential.

[Kiri Nells]

Wonderful write. I remember that like it was last friday... oh wait, it WAS last friday. lol well great job. :)

[BlackCl0ud]

A witty way to flip those annoying pests off, I like it! Only a few spelling and grammatical errors but who am I to talk.