A Poem by daydreamer

An act which can ravage our soul


A feeling hard to bear

Burns my soul

With a hallmark ire


Trust breached

Faith shaken

Dreams destroyed


Abandoned into wasteland

Filled with abjuration, anger and void

I stare deep into vaccum


Tears stream down my eyes

Like a bitter concoction

Of blood cooked on hellfire


Shallow dark eyes

Still searching for a waft of

Memoirs of romantic yesteryear


One query on my lips to heavens

What transpired when I was gone?

Why did you abandon me?


In a sea of deep

Dark wretched lonely

Emotion called deception

© 2012 daydreamer

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You weave the wondrous, dark metaphor into the depth of the mind and heart.. that pain.. that cavern of despair... that place we slip into when deceived... Powerful.

Posted 7 Years Ago

Thank you so much R:0 for your kind reviews. i am flattered:)

Posted 7 Years Ago

Amazing! This is an emotive piece that really hits home!... your work of art is alway a masterpiece. Great work my friend!

Posted 7 Years Ago

Thanks Scottlehem for your kind review. Yes it should have been abjuration:)

Posted 7 Years Ago

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Added on September 25, 2012
Last Updated on September 28, 2012
Tags: deception, treachery, faith, abjurance



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