My Goddess Venus

My Goddess Venus

A Poem by daydreamer

This is a tale of one sided but sensitive love story


At the break of the dawn

The earth was about to yawn

Among the lush flowers in my lawn


A sweet song was blooming

Musical notes were grooming

Tall golden oaks were swaying


Goddess Venus descended!

Heartbeats wildly fluttered

Each breath shuddered


Smile on her face mesmerising

Dark brown eyes tantalizing

Rose on her lips fantasizing


She greeted with a sweet hello

Enough to light up a dormant tale

Though  wasn’t of Romeo and Juliet’s scale.


Nightingales sang, Swan’s danced

Time was ripe to rip open feelings

Her words flew my brains to ceiling.


“Dear I am getting married”

Shook my body and soul torrid

Goddess Venus ascended!


Goddess are meant to be

In the heavens,

 Not among the ravens!


My Goddess Venus ascended

Leaving behind pool of tears

But, a dream to last for years.













© 2011 daydreamer

Author's Note

it is a late night poem. hope it is improving my writing. kindly spend your valuable time and post your reviews:)

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i loved the magical feel to it!
Great write.

Posted 12 Years Ago

Lyrical and charming. Although the end was sad, I felt the happiness of falling in love. Such a sweet poem! I loved it!

Posted 12 Years Ago

Ah.. Smitten by Venus .. Young love spurned .. Tears for what could have been ..

Sadly sweet ... Jasmine ..

Posted 12 Years Ago

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3 Reviews
Added on October 15, 2011
Last Updated on October 15, 2011



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