Sweet tooth

Sweet tooth

A Poem by daydreamer
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we never value the value of a tooth in the mouth until we experience sweet tooth. but it has also other meanings and i have tried to explore these meanings:0

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I am white as milk

Strong like Hulk

I am born twice

Without any price

 

I am white as milk

Strong like hulk

My owners bear pain

It’s a labour of love

 

I make them smile

I give them the style

I make them healthy

My mind is never filthy

 

I am white as milk

My heart is so clear

Like a new spring

From the virgin glacier

 

I am strong as Hulk

It’s not my bulk

Come what may

On my feet I stay!

 

I serve my master

Color, Creed, appearance

Never do matter

My honesty is never in tatter

 

I wear, tear, fracture

Never for a moment

I disobey master’s order

Offer my life to master


 My love is my life 

Hatred, rage or violence

Make me clutter

Why master’s life is

Filled with such negative chatter?

© 2011 daydreamer


Author's Note

daydreamer
i have tried using teeth as a metaphor and compare its purity with so many issues plaguing humanity. Honest and constructive reviews are always welcome:)

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Very nice job...
Curious though... Who is the Master?

Posted 12 Years Ago


teehee i liek this :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


To serve, with goodness and light .. Being strong in wisdom and character ..

Wonderful words of life .. Jasmine ..

Posted 12 Years Ago


There is a context of strength, in the "integrity" of this poem, that I find unwavering. Great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on October 21, 2011
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Mangalore, karnataka, India



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