Lesser blue wings

Lesser blue wings

A Poem by daydreamer
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Lesser blue wings are extremely rare Dragon fly. They are very rarely sighted

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Lesser blue wings

 Your name so divine

You are precious and rare

Such is your fame.

 

Tell me why?

You are so elusive

Extremely shy?

Make me your serf.

 

You are never flashy

Habitat so marshy,

Prefer solitude,

No prim attitude

 

Are you a dragon fly?

You don’t spit fire

You are so slender

Your body like wire

 

Gentle is your kiss

On my pouted lips

Your love so sweet

Mirthful times flash by

 

Your wings so gentle

Your Dark blue bodice

 Arouses impetuous storm

Deep within my c**k pit

 

High up when you fly

Taking me in your arms

When you make me dance

Our charm ,exotic and oriental.

 

Twilight till day light

Swinging to music of cornet

Our chemistry non fathomable

Our passion a musical soirée

 

Our feelings are not feign

Genuine heartfelt, not deport-able!

Tell me why?

Lesser blue wings

 

You leave me in delirium

In pain and hallucination

At the break of sunrise

Deep into the marshes


Tell me why?

Isn't my love so true?

Why you make me wait?

Till the break of moonlit night.

 

© 2012 daydreamer


Author's Note

daydreamer
Here I have attempted to portray a rare dragon fly as a beautiful nocturnal princess.
feeling good to be back in WC after an unexpected break

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I see now why your name is daydreamer. Very floaty. I enjoyed this piece.

~ Scandalous

Posted 12 Years Ago


thanks every body for your kind review:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


It's amazing and interesting poem.. i really enjoyed this.. i really like the imagery and i specially like 8th stanza! :D Well done :**

Posted 12 Years Ago


Beautifully written :) Lovely detail!

Posted 12 Years Ago


wow this is so beautiful I really enjoyed it! It flowed great greeat write keep em coming. The way you presented it was really great bny the first stanza I knew it was going to be a good peom

Posted 12 Years Ago


(laughs) As I read the poem, I'm really thinking of a beautiful angel high up in the sky... and when I read the description, I called myself a little silly to not realized you were referring to a dragon fly. Nevertheless, the overall flow of words are good and really fun to read. I so much like this one and the feeling it gave to me when I read it back... and again. ;D

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is a Delicate piece of art... You have weaved such gentle connotations of passion in this. Your adoration for an exotic Dragon fly was written with Potent imagination... The beauty of this is Magnificent. Excellent write, my friend!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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This was a true joy from beginning to end. Simply sublime. To be truthful, I am so blown away by it I really don't know what else to say... bar I for one am glad you're back. You never fail to astound, nor amaze. Thank you for letting me read this

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Mangalore, karnataka, India



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