Rose

Rose

A Poem by Brittany

Who would have thought this would be where I would be. I look myself in the mirror and think about an older part of me. As I think back to my dark past my twisted mind wonders what did it. Was it the tiny being that inserted himself into my life? Such a small spec in a large planet changed my world. When the darkness filled my body from head to toe, you were there on your own. Cheering for my success as they rooted for my demise. There was a part of me that wished you’d just let me be and let my life be what it was always meant to be. But you pushed and you shoved until I saw the real me. There’s not enough thanks in the world that I can see that would repay you for everything you did for me. You are the light to my darkness, everything and more. I will love you forever my sweet rose colored boy.

© 2019 Brittany


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Brittany
Just spitballing some feelings.

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I liked how you wrote your thoughts leading to the very good ending.
"You are the light to my darkness, everything and more. I will love you forever my sweet rose colored boy."
I liked the old fashion feel of the words above. Thank you Brittany for sharing the amazing words and thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brittany

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much!
Coyote Poetry

5 Months Ago

You are welcome Brittany.



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Loved this, really well written. Well Done.

Posted 3 Months Ago


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Rye
Oh I liked this, loved the last two lines the best, This is wonderful.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I liked how you wrote your thoughts leading to the very good ending.
"You are the light to my darkness, everything and more. I will love you forever my sweet rose colored boy."
I liked the old fashion feel of the words above. Thank you Brittany for sharing the amazing words and thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brittany

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much!
Coyote Poetry

5 Months Ago

You are welcome Brittany.

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