Orange

Orange

A Poem by Suavis_Umbra
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"the memory of the orange tree,holds space in my essence's creed."

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The emancipated leaves soon enter through,
 the tunnels of my mind,
I become part of the cycle of something more-- 
a nature of some kind.

I witness the orange loneliness burst- and 
explode with life.
An sunset leaf dancing with the wind;
Cutting through space like a knife.

I soon entangle myself into the arbour--
the vines of my source.
A honey dipped dark bubble.
The sky is my course

Life is long and fruitful indeed,
But the memory of the orange tree,
holds space in my anima's creed.

© 2012 Suavis_Umbra


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one amazing read here, quite enjoyed, so poetic as well

Posted 8 Years Ago


Suavis_Umbra

8 Years Ago

thanks a lot , XD
A amazing poem. Gave life to the orange tree. I like the way you described cycle of life and the birth of life. I like the ending a lot. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


Suavis_Umbra

8 Years Ago

thanks XD , im glad you like it XD XD XD XD
This was a really great poem. I love the rhyme scheme and the word play. To be totally honest, I'm not the big word person, so I have no idea what "anima" means, but I'm sure it ties in and makes since... (i just don't feel like searching on google) XD keep it up :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Suavis_Umbra

8 Years Ago

Thanks a lot XD XD XD , anima is the part of your psyche which is directed inward and is connected t.. read more
Tevin Smith

8 Years Ago

yo this is i'll i'd like to see that orange sometime lol

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Added on October 1, 2012
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Tags: nature, emancipated, life, burst, knife, arbour, vines, source, honey, dark, bubble, course, sky, creed, essence, soul, fruitful

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Suavis_Umbra
Suavis_Umbra

Terra, Dark Corner of the Earth, United Kingdom



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