Winter Breeze

Winter Breeze

A Poem by Redrascalstrawberry
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The poem describes a scene where the cold winter breeze is spreading its magic across the region.

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Miracles blowing by,
Pondering a destiny.
With a stash of cold,
And the drifting chillness.
Slashing by every alive thing,
Awakening the dead's stillness,
Of every worn out leaf,
Clutching at their bestowed quietness.
It hinders the auspicious trees,
Swirling across its tendrils.
Pushing across the crippled brick walls,
Enduring with its magical mightiness.
Stimulating the vibratory motion,
Of every whist window;
Staging its characters,
On its vivid and creaky nature.
Embarking itself in every nook and corner,
Of the bumpy halting street.
And tempting the waters,
Towards its minute prophecy.
Now hence the winter breeze,
Engulfs the moment in its sorcery

© 2012 Redrascalstrawberry


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Such an enjoyable read.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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I love winter breezes and the different energies that seem to move on the wind! You captured that breeze and touched it with magic! Beautiful job on this poem!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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So descriptive and strong! Great poetry, I loved the way u made the poem flow! 100/100 :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


I'm chilled! Ha.
Great pen.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Stronger now... colder... a bit more visceral.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Cool...I felt like I was being whisked off into a magical land.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Redrascalstrawberry

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much for reviewing :)
Vivid imagery! Great write!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Redrascalstrawberry

9 Years Ago

Thank you:)
I enjoyed the poem. The strong description create vision of a cold winter a coming. Nice flow of thoughts with a very good ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


Redrascalstrawberry

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much the encouraging words:)

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Redrascalstrawberry
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Hello! I'm 16 years old and I've been writing since I was very young and have also won some Poetry competitions and was also recently published in Silkworms Ink's anthology. My areas of interest are.. more..

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