Love's Sinful Disguise

Love is pain in its most sinful disguise

Waiting for you on the side lines

Waiting for when you’re most vulnerable

The love strikes taking part of your soul

 

Don’t fall for the chocolates and rose

Don’t once again go down that miserable road

It destroys all innocence that was once known

Leaving you waiting longingly by the silent phone

 

The heartache that’s waiting isn’t worth it

You heart can’t take one more stitch

Then one day your heart will break,

And it will be impossible to fix

 

Love will forever be pain in its moat sinful disguise

Haunting you until the day you die

Author's Note

IM SO DONE WITH THIS SHIT! SOMONE JUST RIP MY FUCKING HEART OUT OF MY CHEAST TO STOP THE PAIN!!!!!!!!!! please....

Reviews

[Pi Cee]

I hate that people have such a negative view on something that isn't even the word they give it. Love, is an amazing, uplifting, complicated, web of compassion and respect and beauty. You, by having read this, obviously haven't even glimpsed that. Give up with the petty immature 'stuff' you have going on here, and look for respect and comfort before you go and write off love.

[Bridget Murphy]

Being betrayed by anyone is the worst pain and this poem said it though not directly.

[Keeley]

Underastandle. Good rythm. You seriously need soo optomism in your life though(;

[paparapapa]

A very pessimistic view on love but we can't deny that we really think like this at times. Totally relatable. Great stuff. :)

[bobby]

The manner in which you express your thoughts makes one believe you have gain control of the pain and the disquise love takes on to capture your heart. Very insightful or full of expierence. Good thoughts

[Ubiquitous]

I find all of your poetry so relatable! As to your description, I can only tell you it gets better. I once had no hope, and I am finally smiling again. Returning to the poem, I like the rhymes and the flow. Well done!