this is a song i wrote

There are no words deep enough for this song.

As I lay here and try to find the words, I realize there's no easy way to explain it.  Why cant I under stand these feelings deep inside?  How did I get so cold?  How did I get so lonely? I need someone to really be there for me.  Because when I feel like this I just want to scream, I'm in so much pain.  I wanna scream. I wanna cut. I wanna see the blood. I wanna feel the rush.  As i read these words I'm starting to get it. I understand that it's not always my fault.Why did i think that?  How could i be so wrong?  I'm thinking now maybe I was wrong all along.  Because i felt like if i didn't scream.  If i didn't cut there would be no way for me to express my hurt.  Now when i play this song I look back and see the old me. She's standing there with blood running everywhere.  And as I see her I am so happy that I'm not her any more.

Author's Note

let me know what you think. all comments appreciated

Reviews

[vampireprincess]

this is good

[Numb]

A quite gripping song indeed. Excellent job. Do you have a title for it? Anyway, you really do have a thing for writing songs.

~N~

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good story. I like the movement and the ending. Hard to realized we are on the wrong road. We must get off and find some calm and peace. I like the ending. A strong poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[loowzerX]

cool style. love it

[Cherrie Palmer]

change this from story form to verse and stanza, I liked it very much. :)

[~Lizzy♬]

I really feel the pain in the story. I am hoping that this didn't actually happen to you. You need to become a song writer.