Forever Sky

Forever Sky

A Poem by Westminster Abbey
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My first poem. It's probably not good

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I find it strange to say that the sky goes on forever.

In a way, when you look at the sky, you are looking at that forever.

It's too far away to see.

But at the same time, it's right in your face.

© 2012 Westminster Abbey


Author's Note

Westminster Abbey
This probably isn't any good, it's my first. But tell me what you think anyway, I love constructive critism! :)

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Great! Love that it goes straight to the point. A short poem can be just a powerful as a long one (and sometimes more so) and this one is! Keep writing!

Posted 10 Years Ago


First, I love the pic! It's what drew me in. Second, I think this is cute. It's like wandering thoughts, but it's short and sweet and comes to a point. Great job :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


OH MY GOODNESS!!! Why haven't I reviewed this yet? +__+

What are you saying this isn't any good?! THIS IS SUPPERRR GOOOODDD!!! AMAZING! AHHHHH This si going on my favorite list!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Westminster Abbey

10 Years Ago

I really wish it was longer... but I can't think of how to make it longer. Just some wandering thoug.. read more
The picture caught my eye first, and then I was captured by the poem itself. I personally don't read a lot of different types of poems, but I like this. Keep writing. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This reminded me of the following song from Journey http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vF1HCMGZ4Ok


Not bad, not bad at all

Posted 10 Years Ago


i like it ...well done

Posted 10 Years Ago


there is NO beyond to infinity

Posted 10 Years Ago


First rule of poetry is if you wrote it from your heart, it's good. Second rule is never get too caught up in what other people think. It's your work, your rules, take what you think will work for you from other's feedback and ignore what does not speak to you.

having said that, I like this poem. The sky being in your face and forever at the same time. I won't look at the sky quite the same way tomorrow! Great job. ;)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Westminster Abbey

10 Years Ago

Thanks. Honestly, I didn't even consider this a poem whenever I wrote it, I don't usually write poem.. read more
Wow, I never thought of it that way. This was a bit of a slap in the face for me, in a good way though. Nice 100/100

Posted 10 Years Ago


So true, not typically a fan of short poems but I like this.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on August 26, 2012
Last Updated on August 26, 2012
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