Tears to Forgiveness

Strangers.

Sisters.

Tears.

Pain.

Anguish.

All the masks Faded

All what pain has caused

All of what has been felt

Feeding depression

the devil that Takes over

the monster that Controls

Welcomes

Invites

Itself back In

taking Hostage

Over

Yourself

Feeding off each tear

caused by 

pain

memory

good or bad?

bad overpowering good?

tears

fall deeper

run thicker

How can they Stop?

How can or 

could

they possibly 

ever be

Stopped

Forever

How?

Forgiveness

Heals

Allows the tears 

to Turn

Anger

Negative

to 

Positive

Love

Hope

Forgiveness

of

Others

of 

Ourselves

Forgiveness

brings

the tears

that once 

cascaded

down 

down

My face

to A 

STOP.

Reviews

[Bexfinch]

This poem remind me of an Isa Arie song where she says " Forgiveness is the sweetest thing when you let it all go I'ts the sweetest thing cause you can breathe again," This had a beautiful flow I love how you manipulated the fonts and spacing to guide the readers eye and you even used colour. This was truely art and you are an artist. Thank you for the review I'm really thankful and keep up the good work

[no sun]

Brilliant writing. Loved the format! Absolutely going into my favs.

[Tim]

Well done with a commendable resolution.