Their Voice

Their Voice

their voice create a sound,

their voice sail to lost and found,

their voice fill with crowd,

their voice unseen surround.

their voice hug you calm,

their voice bathe you drown,

their voice grant a crown,

their voice kneel you down.

their voice chain your path,

their voice deviate your wrath,

their voice seal your mouth,

their voice save you worth.

their voice chew your word,

their voice arrest your world,

their voice drive you crud,

their voice stab you blurred.

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

Rhythmically quite entertaining to read.

[reinell]

thanks Adams :) . Perhaps you can help me to improve it to be more entertaining?

[Adam Adams]

As you wish, sweetheart...
here we go now...

"... & the voice creates the sound;
sails to lost & found, around;
fills with crowd in mild-mid town,
o' yes, their voices have you bound, (surround).

o' yes, the voices hug you calm;
bathe you drown deep... drip.. d.. down;
grant the crown, unbound, astound,
o' yes, their voices kneel you down.

And the voices chain the path;
deviate, deflect & reflect your wrath;
Paste & reel & seal the mouth
O' yes, their voices save your worth.

But the voices chew your world
oh yeah, the voices arrest your world
take you, drag you, drive YO crud
O' yes, their voices stab your heart...

(Pause)
continue...

... & the hearts get blah.. blah.. blurred."

[reinell]

oh yeah! let's rap now

[Adam Adams]

Hope you liked it.