Mine & Mind

Mine & Mind

Never mind your mind,

Flipping pages blind,

Dream fly to find,

Wander in wonderland.

Pure soul pray to be mine,

Enlighten rosy land mine,

Spring up deserted mind,

Sense scent of vacate mind.

Cuddle what used to be mine,

Rest evermore in my mind,

Glow bright and be mine,

Remain eternal mine in mind.

Reviews

[Annie Nicole]

I really like this poem of yours. It digs deep into what you want in your life right now. In my eyes it seems as though you are speaking out to your soul, telling it that you want become more in tune with it. You want to create more self love... you see when we are born we all have a physical body but we also contain a body of energy where your soul rests, and often times we lose that part of ourselves and we forget who we really are... you seem as though you want to become more connected with that and to accept yourself for who you are. Well that's how i felt when i read this anyway... hopefully not too far from what you were originally going for.. if so sorry haha.
Very nice job, keep on writing, you have a beautiful image to share with the world!
I look forward to reading more of your work.

[Shabeeh Haider]

A longing to win a person's love. I like the way you have used rhymes in this poem.

[reinell]

thanks Shabeeh Haider :) . This poem is actually about finding my own self where i feel at loss, hope that I can be a better person and an angel may guide and help me to the right path, and my hope to retain good deeds that I used to practice before