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Self-Sin

Self-Sin

A Poem by Kyle Sky
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Shall sin devour me, Save me from this storm.

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Self-Sin

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Beneath warmth so true of heavens seen blue,

A shadow has fallen of a storm so sudden.

Clouded corruption of our own heart’s actions,

Blinding the day of light and now begins storm’s might.

Pouring down from high- the storm’s horrid cry.

Shiver under showers,

Fear lightning’s powers,

Frozen by treacherous gale,

Crushed under heavy hail,

Deafened by thunder’s scream,

Choked by mist and steam,

Drowned under muddy water,

And see my soul shatter,

In this storm I am in.

In the storm of self-sin.

© 2012 Kyle Sky


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That is profoundly true . We are the eye of our own storm . Sin rages within . Wages an all out battle . Such formidable foe we're outclass . Till the Sin Bearer shattered . At Calvary's Cross He defeated . Sins guilty sting and stains no more ...

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wow, very impressive write here!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Amazing and I love the way you made it look like a tornado.

Posted 9 Years Ago


You've expressed your own thoughts and it is clear that you have worked upon entirely your own ideas, all I can say is be careful not to be sucked into rhyming, I find it can sometimes lead to sheltering what we actually mean to present because we focus on the rhyming as opposed to the flow which most expresses ourselves. All in all though this was great. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


well this is a well bbuilt idea and i love the fact that you recognise that you are seeing your soul shatter in the storm of self-sin. that creates a vivid imagery of the life oof comeone lost in sin.
loved it and absolutely great write!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


This was interesting... Good write. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on December 14, 2012
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Kyle Sky
Kyle Sky

Philippines



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I am 18 and have a passion for literature, arts and music. I am a third year college student as of now. I love to read and write basically in the genre of adventure, romance, horror, crime and s.. more..

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