Gratiam

Gratiam

A Poem by Kyle Sky
"

See, hear, breathe and feel.

"

Gratiam

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Meadows soft, Roses bloom,

Winds whisper, Shadows loom,

Ground softens, Water flows,

Clouds drizzle, Color glows,

Air moistens, Mist fades,

 Sunlight shines, Branches shades,

Crickets chirp, Nature calls,

Grey appear, Noontime falls,

Shade scatters, Light collides,

Writer writes, Landscape guides,

Gratiam.

© 2013 Kyle Sky


Author's Note

Kyle Sky
See, hear, breathe and feel the grace.

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I really enjoyed this one. There is a positive note that I really like.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Interesting. I myself am not a poem type of guy, but I am able to give you some advice.

Branches shades - that's obviously a bit stretched. Try branches' shades, which makes branches plural and the whole statement grammatically correct.

Besides the poor grammatical notice of mine, I can't offer up anything more but a question. What exactly does Gratiam mean?

Posted 6 Years Ago


Contrasting paradox . Cloud drizzle you have rainbows . Crickets chirps mating calls. . Treat imagination

Posted 8 Years Ago


A poem of the senses . Well penned and rhyming...:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Wow! This is wonderful! I love the rhymes and the whole poem. :))
I really don't know what to say.
This made me speechless. One of the best I have read here. :))

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very beautiful, very soft and peaceful, a feel of nature and of grace. This is one fantastic poem!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is by far one of your best pieces, in my eyes Kyle! This rhymes with indeed a great feel of grace.

"Writer writes", this was a great term, it brought together the natural detail you had depicted, and showed a value of self-consciousness which I always find intriguing in poetry.

Lovely write!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Kyle Sky

9 Years Ago

thank you very much
I wonder what the word gratiam means and where this is heading. But nonetheless, dude, keep working wonders as always.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Kyle Sky

9 Years Ago

thank you, and gratiam is a latin term for grace.
Rhianne Ney

9 Years Ago

I see, you're welcome~

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Tags: writing, art, landscape, grace

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Kyle Sky
Kyle Sky

Philippines



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