Down

Thunderous water 

Coming down 

Down 

Down 

Splattering the soil 

Carving through the ground 

Spraying out the dewdrops 

The water's coming down 

Down 

Down 

Pouring off the ceilings 

Dripping off the trees 

Angry tepid water 

Coming down to me 

Author's Note

another rain poem :P

Reviews

[Aehr]

rain... you can write so much about it, right? I like this one. it's unique, and your word-choice is good! :)

[MOON]

Rain is a great topic , lovely write.

[Tai Ryens]

I like the structure and flow of this poem.

[Heromen Selena]

I really like rain, a lot. This was a cute poem. Good job :)

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

I love poems about the rain, and yours is no exception. I like the repetition. If I could make one suggestion, I think the "to" in the last line should be "on" or "over". ...Nice job.

[Rhea752]

Thank You :P

[C.C. Marx]

I like the mental pic it give really great imagery

[Rhea752]

thx :D

[C.C. Marx]

np enjoyed it!