Waiting

Waiting

A Story by Rhea752

The sky wasn't blue, it was cold, and grey and mirthless. Winter had arrived and the birds were migrating, the trees turned into skeletal figures, and the ground was hard and littered with dead leaves. However, the downcast weather did not deter the 9 year old girl from coming out into the lawn every day, swinging on the porch swing and watching the sky. She did this because of a story her father once told her.

 

"Did you know that when you look into the sky you're looking into the universe, my mother told me this and I will tell you now. the universe is an endless place full of adventures and I believe that after death our spirits will journey into the universe. So when I am gone, all you have to do is look into the sky to find me."

 

Every day, whether rain, snow, hurricanes, or even hail the girl came out and looked up at the sky for an hour, hoping that maybe her father would be there waiting for her to finally see him.

© 2013 Rhea752


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wow this is really touching, i like how you wrote this story, by connecting the sky and the little girl:) good work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhea752

10 Years Ago

Thanks :P
Beautiful description and it touched me, looking at the sky for her father no matter the weather. I wonder what happened to the father? Anyway, nicely done :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhea752

11 Years Ago

That is up to the readers imagination. Thx for the review
Touched my heart. Amazing description, Rhea. Well done :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhea752

11 Years Ago

Thx :)
Aehr

11 Years Ago

welx :D
Beautiful and very touching. I like it :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhea752

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much
Felecia

11 Years Ago

you're welcome :D
deeply touching ,very nicely put ,great work dear.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhea752

11 Years Ago

Thx! :D btw nice to see your back :P
Beautiful story, and very sentimental.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhea752

11 Years Ago

Thank you :D
Hm, this is a beautiful story and I feel sorry for the girl since she is just waiting for nothing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhea752

11 Years Ago

Thx ♥
Dominique

11 Years Ago

Your welcome.
this is just precious, the idea of this, remembering dead loved ones and the lingering influences they have on you. beautiful :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhea752

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Lina Grey

11 Years Ago

:)

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Rhea752
Rhea752

Middle Of My Daydreams, FL



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I am a 15 year old girl who loves to read, write, act, and draw. I just started writing seriously about 2 years ago. I've been published a few times in small online magazines. I am trying to find out .. more..

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