Bubbles are Simply Amazing

Bubbles are Simply Amazing

A Poem by Rin
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I did this for extra credit when I was in 9th grade. Hahaha! It's supposed to seem commercial so if it seems cheesy that's why. We were supposed to explain why Amazing Bubbles are amazing.

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A thing shaped so round
That it floats to the ground.
Some pop in midair
While, others don’t even tear
I look deep into the gate
Of the colors formed into a liquid shape
I see blues, reds, greens, and yellows
Like the colors of the rainbows
Some big some small
But, all shaped like a ball
Use air to make the float
Like sailing in a boat
The smell like plastic
With a soapy fragrance, fantastic!
They pop and they spit
Wet spots where they hit
They remind me of rain
Without the pain
They make less noise and are not cold
They are simply bold
Every bubble is different
Different colors and sizes
But, every one of them is fun
 
I read the title that says
“Makes thousands of Bubbles”
They forgot “makes thousands of puddles”
I drop the bubbles container
That made me a complainer
The liquid is so slipper
That makes me so jittery
I slip I fall
As if I was tall
I still have a smile
Because these bubbles are wild
These bubbles are simply amazing
Which is why they are called “Amazing Bubbles.”

© 2008 Rin


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