Where will I die?

I was 14 when I wrote this.

 

 

Will I float in hell or burn in heaven?

Will I burn in hell or float in heaven?

Will I laugh in hell or scream in heaven?

Will I laugh in heaven or scream in hell?

Will I fall down to heaven or fly up to hell?

Will I fly up to heaven or fall down to hell?

Is hell really hell and heaven really heaven

Is earth really earth and life really life?

What is it like in heaven and hell?

Is it true heaven is good and hell is bad?

Do we just go into a black abyss forever or are we reborn?

Do we just go to someplace on Earth?

Will I float and burn in heaven or hell?

Will I scream and laugh in heaven or hell?

Will I fall up and down in heaven or hell?

Will I go to hell for my human lies?

Or go to heaven for the life I lived?

Or will I just be reborn or just sleep for eternity on earth?

Will I just go to a black abyss forever?

Reviews

This is good. I have to agree with phantom I had to ask myself those questions and tried to come up with answers! Its one of those poems where there is not right or wrong answers. The questions are thought provoking! Very good!

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It has caused me to ask myself the same questions it also makes me question some peoples religon. But really good in my book.

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Wow!!! This was a great poem!!! I loved the structure. It added more to the poem. It was very deep. I wonder how many people ask themselves these questions. It was a great poem.