Tasteful Waters

Tasteful Waters

A Poem by Raul Moreno


The mandarin surf,
Reflects the pomelo sun:
Flavors for the eye.

© 2010 Raul Moreno

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Short, but genious. Love it!

Posted 11 Years Ago

Awesome! This has taste, sight and smell and paints such a lovely picture, so very lovely!

Posted 11 Years Ago

Another masterful painting with words! Beautiful and outstanding!

Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cool poem

Posted 11 Years Ago

This is a beautifully described 'tasteful sunset'; a masterpiece that strikes the mind and expands upon the readers' imagination.
I'm there, watching the sunset beyond the tangerine sky.


Posted 11 Years Ago

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5 Reviews
Added on March 28, 2010
Last Updated on April 6, 2010
Tags: Haiku, Nature

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