RAIN

RAIN

A Poem by Marie
"

falling rain...

"


Rain, with silver, silken grace,

Falls in folds of silver lace,

Holds the sky in soft embrace

As the thirsty earth gives praise.

© 2015 Marie


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Awesome imagery.
I greatly enjoyed the delicacy I felt from your view of rain. It's one of those things that gets taken for granted, but the joy you have when you see it is full blown appreciation.
Great work!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Well penned!
Great flow and wonderful descriptions:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Marie

5 Years Ago

Thanks for your comments on this tiny poem.
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SKY
You had shown me the other side of the rain. Very nice and rainy!

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Something so mesmerizing about the patter of rain.
Beautiful poem.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Marie

5 Years Ago

Thank you.
Julia Mars

5 Years Ago

You're welcome, was my pleasure.
Liked the description of Rain. 'Silken grace' and 'silver lace' neatly describes rainfall and leaves a beautiful image in the mind

Posted 5 Years Ago


Marie

5 Years Ago

Thanks. Most of my poems are meant to create images.
Marie

5 Years Ago

Thanks. Most of my poetry is meant to create images.
The first two lines especially are nothing short of perfection. The enchantment is undoubtedly enhanced by the alliteration.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Marie

5 Years Ago

Thank you; that's what I was trying for.
i love the way you write these short, strong poems...so much effect from the rhythm...

Posted 5 Years Ago


Marie

5 Years Ago

Thank you.
Wonderful write. There's so much focus in this that I can feel the exact tempo of the rain you describe. You've got a real knack for nature writing. Your poetry is pure escapism for a city-boy like myself!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Marie

5 Years Ago

Thanks. I too live in the city.
This is simply stunning... how it awakens the heart and mind to the beauty and wonder of rainfall... and enchants the soul to this singular moment...

Posted 5 Years Ago


A great description of rain in just four lines. The alliteration and rhyming make it just roll off the tongue.

Posted 5 Years Ago



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Marie

San Antonio, TX



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