Surreal Love

Surreal Love

A Poem by Silmara McGarry


Between the gracefulness of butterflies, 
and the enchanting sweet colours of 
a warm spring morning, delivered in the 
most surreal dance, lays my Love for you.

Between the storms in the sky and the blue 
lights that surround the angels in heaven, 
mesmerized by the look in your eyes, 
hypnotized by my Love for you.

Between each wave in the ocean, gripped by 
the motion of fresh winds and one thousand 
innocent pearls, in the hands of the singing 
mermaid, breathing calmly, sails my Love for you.

Between the fascinating birds in the forbidden
forest, sweeping around ancient trees, 
sheltering the intense heat that flows quietly 
across its glittering waters, hides my Love for you. 

Between the moon and earth, and stages of 
glowing stars, twinkling up the dark night 
with promises of light, and the great creations 
of God, reflects my Love for you.

© 2018 Silmara McGarry


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Hello Sil, lovely lady.

Your posted image is so uplifting and your stanzas are romantic and packed with beautiful imagery. The final line in each stanza is particularly effective. Very much enjoyed the natural environment woven into the lines of your romantic offering.

Have a great weekend Sil.

Chris



Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

2 Months Ago

Hey darling Chris :-)
Many thanks indeed my dear for your beautiful words and understanding o.. read more



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Is this written as a lovely romantic song? I'm seeing that in this. Lovely words....wonderful thoughts.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

1 Month Ago

Hey! I have not written as a song, but it sure could be one ))) Many thanks indeed Frankie, much app.. read more
Hello Sil, lovely lady.

Your posted image is so uplifting and your stanzas are romantic and packed with beautiful imagery. The final line in each stanza is particularly effective. Very much enjoyed the natural environment woven into the lines of your romantic offering.

Have a great weekend Sil.

Chris



Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

2 Months Ago

Hey darling Chris :-)
Many thanks indeed my dear for your beautiful words and understanding o.. read more
OMG what a magnificent masterpiece my friend!!! I am so happy I stumbled into this, each verse stands alone itself, a breathtaking, a heart stolen piece, something I wish I had written, glorious and heavenly written, I highly applaud You my friend. well done ✨

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

4 Months Ago

OHHHHH....I am ever SO happy you enjoyed my poem, truly !!! What a delight to read your special revi.. read more
Light

4 Months Ago

You are warmly welcome my friend :) You deserve it all, I am happy I made You smile~ Bless You enorm.. read more
This is one of my favorite poems I've read on here. Just the absolute top of the list. It's so beautiful and flows so wonderfully. It captures love, compares it to weather, colors, animals, everything beautiful and it's just an amazing poem. Sorry if I keep repeating myself, I just really adore this one and am amazed by it!

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

4 Months Ago

Hey :-)
I am so glad you enjoyed my poem, and the ever so kind and wonderful words on it, ple.. read more
Between all the love poems that I have read, this is one of the most honest, pure, and affectionate, it flows so easily and reaches the heart so effectively. Applause of respect and astonishment, MH.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

8 Months Ago

My appreciation MH for reading and your superb words/review. Thank you ever so much :-)
Insight "MH"

8 Months Ago

You are welcome!
and there might be those who would scoff at this type of writing saying it is too simple and cutsie...

my thought is opposite....i love it.
it flows wonderfully....great form...but it is also full of joy and hope that real love still exists in this world...and we need more of this feeling right now.
beautiful words.
j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

1 Year Ago

Ohhh... ;-) Thank you indeed!!!
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Vin
LOVE IT!!!
yes such a beautifully captured poem- it is like floating in a dream.
Lots of love...

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

1 Year Ago

Hey! Thank you ever so much!!! ;-)
This is beautiful write, each word is placed in such way as they were destined to be there ...! Enjoyed your work :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

2 Years Ago

Hey Sneh :-) Thank you indeed for reading and such gracious review! Will be reading your work ;-)read more
Your words flow with grace and beauty.
Your poem is mesmerizing since the beginning.
Wonderful writing!!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

2 Years Ago

Wonderful words of yours, and my absolute greatfulness for your review! Stay well ;-)
Ohhh-MY, Dear Sil,
And, in Free Verse Quatrains … love it! : )
What a distinct honor and privilege it is to immerse mind, heart, emotions, and soul into such a moving and intricately woven expression of passion breathed out of your depths ⁓ into your fantasy lover's heart.
With genuinely unique and tenderly soothing (albeit stirring) poetic voice and deftly skilled power of stunning metaphorical imagery, combining, heaven, earth, and Nature, your ink sweeps through one's senses as smoothly and seamlessly as windblown silk undulating to the rhythms of a soft, warm summer breeze … and, beginning each verse with "Between" is a stroke of sheer genius that pulls us into every beguiling beginning, as tho' it's a romantic mystery unfolding.

Catching my breath, let me bow most graciously and gratefully in homage and thanks to you for sharing this emblematically gorgeous peek into your heart, thank you sincerely, Sil ⁓ Richard : )


Love the dreamy mood and feel of your picture choice, too!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

3 Years Ago

STUNNING review dear Richard, it will keep me smiling for a longggg time! God Bless indeed!
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I often try to see the world with angels eyes... To leave people better then I found them, even if is just with a smile... I Love God above all... Simple love poems are my favourite... Most of wha.. more..

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