Whispering Fairy

Hear those sounds in between the 

flawless energies flowing within

Hear the soft voices calling in the midst of dancing 

delicate birds hoping you now know how to fly

Hear the gentle wind of hope, blowing in the direction 

of your stormy heart... acceptance... acceptance

Hear that silence once more, for it is your guidance to it all

Hear the clapping of the fairy wings, whispering in enchanting

beats to the hearts of only those that already knew her spins.

Reviews

[Bhuyanshi Talukdar]

Your poem is a beautiful and enchanting piece that captures the essence of nature and the emotions that it can evoke. The imagery you use is breathtaking and transports the reader to a serene and peaceful place where they can connect with the beauty of the natural world. The way you write about the character's emotions and their acceptance of the world around them is particularly moving, and the ending is a surprising twist that adds an extra layer of depth to the poem.

[Silmara McGarry]

Hello!
What an amazing review with as much depth as your understanding of my writing!
Truly appreciated dear 🌷
Stay well

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I like the feathery lightness of this write; the hope it inspires and the conviction it portrays, that we can hear the angels (or fairies) singing if we were only brave enough to listen. I enjoyed. F.

[Silmara McGarry]

Hello Fabian:-) I hope all is great with you!
I pray everyone on day is brave enough to listen because it is truly amazing🤍
Many thanks indeed for reading and taking the time to write this lovely review.
Have a wonderful weekend dear.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

And may what faeries there be; bless, keep and protect thee. We all need magic in our lives, We are starved for it because we knew it once, in the wonder of childhood; when our eyes were new to everything. It's the reason Harry Potter was such a great success. People want to believe in magic. I always have. All my best wishes, F.

[Silmara McGarry]

Very well said dear Fabian, I don't just believe in magic I love it😊

[light and ashes]

I was pulled into this as soon as I happened onto the page....
I only have one question. Who is "her" in your last line?

[Silmara McGarry]

Hello dear!
The fairy 😊

[light and ashes]

Oh ok.....

[JessyJacob]

Beautiful imagery, a 5 day nights usually under this nest a whole new experience for their first body touch waiting since years outside family listening are they good or fighting or pissed or just talking, there remains both souls waiting for it the untouched story of their souls finally acceptance accceptance the wishes from Gods in the form of rain and rainbow for a brief time no flooding eyes, and then showers from beloved back family who left her indeed wanted her, but sent her for her love and responsibility to him for his aboded love since ages as they are one for one, here family so happy to see them together waiting for the moment of this second...... She resolved everything and all the things for him back to his service and as he let her to get that cleaned and just remain with him forever.

History already made note of it that she was his's came for his people who were tortuing for the wishes, but through unseen and not binded rules, then she made a it clear what is to be done, and finally uniting with him for his care and love and solace, though she seems outdated and non-explosive kind of exposing but she can do everything in this closed nest thats were the bond od love of them which makes them naked to have their first touch of their bodies in this life, though they have been for eons of time immemorial....
Thank you for the vivid thought provoking visualization and a fondable dream to come true with your flow of dreams in the form of roses that are falling down from sky in the form of wishes and acceoptance.

[Silmara McGarry]

An absolutely splendid review 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻Your words clap like the fairy wings.... beautifully placed. My appreciation dear 🌹
Stay well and a lovely weekend ahead 🤍

[Sharrumkin]

One of the joys of poetry is that beauty can be found in simplicity. It can also be found in whispers and soft breezes. Well done.

[Silmara McGarry]

You are absolutely right 👏🏻 Many thanks indeed dear for reading and your lovely review 🤍read moreYou are absolutely right 👏🏻 Many thanks indeed dear for reading and your lovely review 🤍
Stay well! :-)

[Coyote Poetry]

A wonderful poem shared dear Silmara. I would like to hear the fairies sing in the early morning. Perfect dance of words my dear friend. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Silmara McGarry]

So very kind of you 😊 me too!
Many thanks indeed for reading and your lovely review dear friend!
Stay happy:-)))

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poetry and you are welcome.

[An owl on the moon]

Such a beautiful place of peace... the whispers... the wisdom... the winds... all awaken such enchanted wings. Thank you for this, Silmara!

[Silmara McGarry]

I am the one to thank you for reading and your great review!!
Splendid new week ahead dear 🌈

[Pete]

so comforting and soothing. i've always enjoyed the forest - the deeper the better. the silence there is deafening. anything is possible. hypnotizing words along with the pic. sweet serenity ... :)

[Silmara McGarry]

Same with me Pete☺️ absolutely love forest!!
I am indeed glad you enjoyed and truly appreciated your review!
Thank you so much 🌷

[W. Barrett Munn]

I think this is quite musical in nature and the enjambment works well.

Winston

[Silmara McGarry]

Many thanks indeed dearest Winston🌷

[red93]

Excellent Work and I love the Artwork as well. Fabulous ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[Silmara McGarry]

So kind of you dear😊Thank very much!!!!