Whispering Fairy

Hear those sounds in between the 

flawless energies flowing within

Hear the soft voices calling in the midst of dancing 

delicate birds hoping you now know how to fly

Hear the gentle wind of hope, blowing in the direction 

of your stormy heart... acceptance... acceptance

Hear that silence once more, for it is your guidance to it all

Hear the clapping of the fairy wings, whispering in enchanting

beats to the hearts of only those that already knew her spins.

Reviews

[Bhuyanshi Talukdar]

Your poem is a beautiful and enchanting piece that captures the essence of nature and the emotions that it can evoke. The imagery you use is breathtaking and transports the reader to a serene and peaceful place where they can connect with the beauty of the natural world. The way you write about the character's emotions and their acceptance of the world around them is particularly moving, and the ending is a surprising twist that adds an extra layer of depth to the poem.

[Silmara McGarry]

Hello!
What an amazing review with as much depth as your understanding of my writing!
Truly appreciated dear 🌷
Stay well

[willweb]

There truly is no telling what can be heard if your wander into a forest and listen...wonderful things happen. This was nice, very soft and soothing.

[Silmara McGarry]

You are absolutely right, forests has a life of its own! Thank you so much for reading and your kind review 🌹

[DIVYA]

She spins and pirouttes only for those who know her spins. Mindfulness opens up the doors to acceptance and the endurance to face disruptive winds. There’s so much beauty awaiting us.

[Silmara McGarry]

Yes...yes..!!! Thanks indeed dear for reading and your kind review 🌹

[DIVYA]

Loved the read. Looking forward to more. :)
You are welcome Silmara.

[Neville]

to put it mildly, this is quite simply splendid .. the thought of knowing how she spins, makes me feel giddy :)

[Silmara McGarry]

What a lovely review!!!! Thank you so much dear Neville 🌷
Smiles 😊

[Neville]

my very sincere pleasure ma'am 🌹🌹🌹🐝

[Ken Simm.]

Such an atmospheric write. Deep and complex but with the gossamer wings of the fey hovering over it.

[Silmara McGarry]

Dear Ken, much appreciated your words are!!! Thank you so very much 🌹

[emmajoygreen]

Your few phrases give so much to your readers, infinite beauty and calm wrapped if gentle wording. Enormous thanks, dear lady.

' Hear the gentle wind of hope, blowing in the direction
of your stormy heart... acceptance... acceptance

Sighhhh

[Silmara McGarry]

Ohhh truly appreciate dearest 🤍
Thank you so much for reading and your wonderful review 🌹
Hugs
Sil

[Ranger Kessel]

This poem made me feel very mindful of myself and surroundings so it gave me a minute to breathe and relax. Its rare a poem can do that

[Silmara McGarry]

Hello Ranger!
I am certainly glad it made you feel this way :-) Thank you so much!!!
Have a splendid day ;-)))

[JE Falcon]

Clapping, indeed, I hear them more as whispers through the willow tree. But it is thanks to your words that I heard them at all. --- Thanks.

[Silmara McGarry]

I am truly glad to hear that dear!!! Thankyou for your visit and sweet words.
Stay well
read moreI am truly glad to hear that dear!!! Thankyou for your visit and sweet words.
Stay well
:-)

[Chris Shaw]

Beautiful poem Sil. Moments of silence are golden. It is in the silence that we can reflect, learn and find peace. An enchanting write from your pen.

Chris

[Silmara McGarry]

Yesss that golden silence!
Much appreciated dear Chris, thank you for your visit and sweet words :-)

Hugsss and See you :-)))

[Relic]

Yes, silence is a big deal. Inside lie the answers if we can take the time to listen.

Great poem, Sil. :)

[Silmara McGarry]

I agree!
Thank you so much dear for reading it and your visit :-)

See you
read moreI agree!
Thank you so much dear for reading it and your visit :-)

See you
:-)))

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I just love the last line....this poem gives me a really good feeling...
I am dancing to it...spinning to it....
and am hearing the silence which speaks volumes.
j.

[Silmara McGarry]

Ohhh I am happy you enjoy it dear!!! Uhuuuuu :-))))
Yes you are right about the silence ;-)read moreOhhh I am happy you enjoy it dear!!! Uhuuuuu :-))))
Yes you are right about the silence ;-)

Many thanks indeed Jacob for your lovely review, truly appreciated!

See you
:-)