SEA PORTRAIT

SEA PORTRAIT

A Poem by Marie
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silence of the sea by vally5


Rolling

Tolling

Crashing

Clashing

Roaring

Soaring

Weeping

Sleeping

Thrilling

Killing

Golden

Molten

© 2015 Marie


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You have described it well. I like the picture, the font and the rhyme. Thank you.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Marie

5 Years Ago

I'm glad you enjoyed it.
a creative write marie,loved the image,i may have borrowed it lol

Posted 6 Years Ago


Marie

6 Years Ago

I took the image off the Internet; anyone can use it.
 wordman

6 Years Ago

thank you marie
The sea/beach is one of my favorite places, and I adore poems about it.

I love how you have used structure to create meaning, and your words roll down the page to mimic the waves.

Lovely.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Marie

6 Years Ago

Thanks. I hadn't thought about the words making waves...
yes, that is the sea, in all its personas....and you capture it in a poem that rolls like the waves...

Posted 6 Years Ago


Marie

6 Years Ago

Thank you.
I love the roaring and crashing of the sea... so like a beast... and you awaken the beast so powerfully with your words.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Gosh! what will you think of next, Marie. love it. I don't remember reading anything like it before.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Marie

6 Years Ago

I never tried to write anything quite like this before.

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Added on July 22, 2015
Last Updated on July 22, 2015
Tags: rolling, soaring, weeping

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San Antonio, TX



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