If I

If I

A Poem by Rachael

People are brought into this world

to exit just as quickly


Memories and good times become a blur

 

If I were to die now

If I were to die now

My friends, would they miss me

My family, would they be in despair

 

I wonder if I could bare it myself

 

You, you

If you were to die now

 

 

I would go into depression

I couldn't live without you

I just hope you would say the same to me

© 2010 Rachael


Author's Note

Rachael
Sorry about the different fonts and stuff, it got messed up.

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I would miss you, so please dont die.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So beautifully expressed and so deeply moving. Such love and friendships are to be cherished. Thank you for this wonderful write!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i have a similar poem called "would they".....nicely penned emotions! liked it.....

:) Smiles,
Poetic Soul

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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