Scattered Life

hmm.. idk.tell me what you think. i guess it is kind of random thoughts put together.

As I close my eyes, my head begins to wander.

Questions and events roll through like an old movie film.

And sometimes I feel like I should never open them again.

The stresses of each and every day suck the strength out of me.

It’s as if I have exploded and all that’s left of me are tiny pieces, scattered over previous events in my life.

Finding those pieces is going to be impossible, yet every day I try to recall those parts of my life, which will be the clues to putting my life back together.

 

(please help me find the clues…)

 

Reviews

[Kaitlin]

Hmmm very thought provoking.
It sorta similar to my memories poem.
I like it.
Ok Writer Cafe should have a "like button" like Facebook does because that would make my job so much easier.

[An owl on the moon]

I loved your vibrant imagery and emotion in this piece. It can be pictures so clearly... the fragments... gathering your life back together again. Wonderful write!

[Chamil3001]

stop looking for clues outside..
Thus, you can only find your clues by look into your own life.
surely ppl can help yes :)
I hope you may find what you seek soon..
Josh